Saturday, October 26, 2013

word play - adverbs, building on kernal sentences


Word Play – Adverbs                 October 24, 2013    lajj
Sometimes the weird orchestra badly played Beethoven’s 5th symphony after hanging from tree branches.

Finally the mustached orchestra dangerously played Beethoven’s 5th symphony while strapped to the roof of a jumbo jet.


Now she is the scary nymph randomly firing missiles here in the magic rainforest.

Finally she is the powerful nymph vigorously creating unicorns outside by the pool.
  
Finally the 1st party mutant cookie nervously sings during a brainstorm.

Today the 3rd party mutant planet sings boisterously during a neutron star apocalypse.


Thanks to Cole, Nolan and Mrs. J

Enjoy!


Review: Steps along the Learning Journey


Part 1  Mrs. J’s Musings today: October 25, 2013
Remember the Learning Journey?
How well do you understand your place in it?
A quick review: a learner has a question, (right now I am interested in learning how to make sweet relish); they seek out resources that may provide an answer (I turn to the convenience of the internet), they ‘play’ (work, make, experiment-I haven’t yet taken the opportunity) with the answer to prove its accuracy (or error). They articulate (apply words to) (… or… I will spread my creation on a sandwich) what they have learned; finally, they ‘publish’ their words. Publish? (I will munch it down and hope it is as good as the sample I had last week)
‘Publish’ means putting the words into the sentence FORMS that communicate the learner’s desired meaning and deciding who needs to read the words and why and what place or venue this can best be accomplished. (It may also mean putting my new understanding into other FORMS-media of choice; creating the relish, for instance and sharing it with others.
All writing is words ordered in sentence FORMS.  FORMS are limited and learnable. Content – what is articulated in those FORMS – is individual and infinite. 
         LEARN FORMS BEFORE CONTENT!!
We are ultimately responsible for our own words, but they are disjointed bits without the FORMS (patterns) that determine meaning. Words contained in FORMS generate meaning. (Ingredients according to order produce relish.) Understanding FORMS well gives you creative control over your content (words). Meaningful content generates understanding, for yourself and your readers. Your questions can be well and thoroughly answered, by you!







Learning Journey Part 2
What follows is a bit of a rant I published last spring. It adds to the discussion of the Learning Journey above; it still works for me and is reprinted below for your thoughtful consideration:


“Teachers are overworked and underpaid,
What energy it takes to turn a torrent into a trickle;
Then to direct that trickle down narrow,
Well-marked channels.”

This is the perfect metaphor for all I have learned in many decades of working in the teaching profession. If I can leave anything profound to the rising generation of teachers it is this: the children arriving at my first grade classroom door knew how to learn and were full of 6 years of doing it brilliantly! And no two of them were alike in their learning; their interests; their genius. Let them teach you their different ways of knowing.
Stop expending effort turning this torrent of learning into the trickle of conformity demanded by workbooks and standardized tests and bells ringing. Instead, step into the flood by following their natural learning journey.   Remember you are their resource not their reason, find out their background knowledge before presenting your ‘great’ (curriculum) idea. Let them ask the questions that indicate personal gaps between knowing and understanding; let them re-arrange and play with the new information until it works through their bodies and into their minds to filling understanding gaps.
Provide opportunities for them to explore all the media, all the different ways of showing how their understanding can be articulated; articulation is the best assessment.
Imagination and creativity are expected of our learners; frequently demanded in workbook pages, no less! Until prior knowledge and present learning connect in understanding (and is articulated) there is no framework on which to hang the power of imagining. And the habit of recording thoughts and ideas assists in this development. 
Creativity feeds on the power of imaginative connections, examining possibilities and turning them into visible products or services; every learner can make a difference in this world if we learn to follow the natural learning journey in their world.


Sunday, October 20, 2013

Changing the existing reality, build a new model, FORMS


October 20, 2013            Mrs. J Musing .

Study notes:
I was looking back through my journal today; and noted an assortment of thoughts I had recorded in the last six months. I collected a few here to see if I find a pattern in the learning.

Chip McGregor
“…the  greatest means of impacting the future is to build into another person’s life.”

“You never change things by fighting the existing reality. To change something, build a new model (or help someone else to build it?) that makes the existing model obsolete. –Buckminster Fuller

Thomas B. Aldrich
“A thing cannot be weighed in a scale not capable of containing it.” 
(Who can measure the potential of a human mind accept God?)

From “How to Write a Sentence and How to Read One” by Professor Stanley Fish
“Syntax gives words the power to carry meaning.” “Syntax (FORMS): “Tie yourself to forms and the forms will set you free.”

Edwin Schlossberg
 “The skill of writing is to create a context in which other people can think.” (Create a content through powerful understanding and use of written FORMS….build a new model?)

John Green
“Sometimes, you read a book and it fills you with evangelical zeal, and you become convinced that the shattered world will never be put back together, unless and until all living humans read the book.” (Personal content poured into the FORMS of our language; change lives.) The Book Thief had that effect on me; it is hard to ‘study’ as such, needing, rather to be absorbed and digested……….

All are welcome to add thoughts to my musings........



Monday, September 30, 2013

experiences, thoughts, words, FORMS, kernal sentences, September summary


Summary of September online writing classes: 2013

We are all learners – all ways. Our bodies are fine tuned instruments that absorb the sounds, sights, smells, tastes and textures of experiences.  Each learner develops (adds to, modifies) their own filter of understanding by asking their own questions and doing their own research – no two people understand in the same way.


Each learner generates their own thoughts about each experience.
In class we focused on the magic moment when thoughts turn into words: when unseen ideas, dressed in words, are suddenly public.
As Oliver Wendall Holmes put it: “A word … is the skin of a living thought…”.

And… we can only express ourselves within the range of our bank of words…

And… we can empower our expressions by learning the syntactical FORMS offered by our language for structuring relationships among words. We are focusing on recognizing ‘kernal’ sentences.

Here is one example I used with the groups.
It is the first sentence from: The Very Hungry Caterpillar by Eric Carle
In the light of the moon, a little egg lay on a leaf.

Egg – noun – subject, ‘doer’ of the sentence.
Lay  - verb – action,  done by the doer

Everything else (phrases, adjectives, etc) add detail to the ‘kernal’; like heat, it ‘pops’ the ‘kernel’ into something with greater ‘flavor’ and detail. (Thanks, Smith kids)
Lovin’ words
Mrs J

Monday, September 23, 2013

identifying 'kernal' sentences, base clauses can stand alone, content into FORM


September 23, 2013
Invitation to write! 
Enjoy! 
Mrs. J

Pursuing ‘kernal sentences’! (Base clause)

 Remember you are looking for the - the doer, the doing, and often, 
not always, the done to.
‘Experience’ (read) these examples; ‘feel’ them inside, note new ‘thoughts’ that occur. How could your words add details to these words?? ‘Play’ with the possibilies....expand a few sentences with your own content:

 First - Identify the DOER and the DOING in each sentence.

11.    We launched our boat. (extend how, where, when, why?)
22.    Mom bakes cookies.
33.    Somebody else was able.
44.    Abstract knowledge is unhelpful.  !!
55.    Jenny is painting the fence.
66.    People make mistakes.
77.    He braked his bus.
88.    My dog slurps water.
99.    Everything is expensive
110.                  This gear is not shifting.
111.                  The fire is burning outside.
112.                  Grandma knits sweaters.
113.                  The cherry trees are blossoming.
114.                  Our streetlight went out.
115.                  Bob collects coins.

Begin to realize the VAST content that can fill the ‘kernal’ sentence FORM.
FIND examples from your own reading and writing to share on 
this BLOG.